Jeff Wheeler is without a doubt one of my favorite fantasy writers. His stories are generally based on a real life historical occurrence and then fleshed out fully into a world of magic and fantasy. His talent lies in world building and weaving his series together across centuries and worlds. When reading anything by Wheeler, I’m dorkishly happy to find the exact moment when a completely new series with completely new characters ties seamlessly into a previous book. I also love when a great character from another series finds their way into a new series. Wheeler’s writing makes this incredible feat seem effortless. Y’all know how obsessed I was with Wheeler’s works last year, and as soon as The Harbinger Series came out, I was on it. I have been obsessively reading each book as it is released.
Unfortunately, if we’re being honest, The Harbinger Series is by far my least favorite of Wheeler’s works. Unlike the Kingfountain Series which was a very well developed story with incredibly engaging full-bodied characters, The Harbinger Series feels like it has a lot of potential but wasn’t edited down and buttoned up. In addition to the main characters, Cettie and Sera, there are a lot of characters and two worlds to keep track of in this series, along with monsters, politics, lost history, war, romance and friendship. There are so many story lines running at once that the reader tends to lose and pick up the story again and again.
While Sera grows, develops and matures in a way that is consistent with her character throughout the series, Cettie changes drastically and starts making decisions that are in no way aligned with what we know her character to be. Wheeler never fleshes out why Cettie starts behaving so oddly, so the series loses a lot of plot consistency with her waffling. Wheeler normally writes young women well, so to see Cettie go from a strong smart young woman to a very insecure one, was terrible.
The Harbinger Series also introduces a new type of magic that allows entire estates to float in the air. As a reader, the floating estates caused too many issues. I wanted to know what these estates actually looked like, how the plants managed to survive, how big they were, what the weather was like, how people got from one place to the other. Wheeler, rather than getting into the details on these, explains them away with “it’s one of the Mysteries”. Supposedly, no one in the entire world knows how these estates float, except when the owners go too far into debt, the estates crash back down to the ground, putting everyone below in danger. The floating estates are also accessed by “Hurricanes”, a type of sky ship that is powered, again, by “The Mysteries”.
One of my biggest issues with The Harbinger Series is how the technology and magic doesn’t seem to align. They have floating estates and sky ships, but not indoor plumbing.
In addition to all of the alignment and consistency issues, The Harbinger Series is darker than all of the other books, making for a very long read.
I love Jeff Wheeler and I really wanted to love the Harbinger series. Unfortunately, it’s a 3 star rating this time. Still a good series and good books, just not breathtaking like The Kingfountain Series.
Until next time, happy reading!